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Style

Positive Form

Issues
  • doesn't
Explanation

From the Elements of Style: "Make definite assertions. Avoid tame, colorless, hesitating, non-committal language. Use the word not as a means of denial or in antithesis, never as a means of evasion."

He was not very often on time. => He usually came late.

He did not think that studying Latin was much use. => He thought the study of Latin useless.

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First and Second Person

Issues
  • We
  • You
Explanation

The more formal the writing, the more you should avoid using first and second person.

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Nominalization

Issues
  • outsourcer
  • development
  • customer
  • management
  • deployment
  • economy
  • quality
  • delivery
  • manager
  • position
  • functionality
  • organization
  • profitability
Explanation

Abstract nouns, such as "decision", often have verb forms, "decide", and several experts urge you to use verbs when possible rather than noun forms known as nominalizations. Sentences with many nominalizations usually have weak verbs such as have, make, give and forms of be as the main verbs. Using the action verbs disguised in nominalizations as the main verbs--instead of forms of be--can help to create engaging rather than dull prose. This check aims to identify abstract nouns, but not all will have a verb form.

Example:
Bad Nominalization: We conducted an investigation of the funding.
Good Sentence: We investigated the funding.

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Stacked Modifiers and Nouns

Issues
  • search marketing, customer service, data processing
  • North America, Australia, China, India, Malaysia, Singapore
Explanation

Avoid using long strings of modifiers or nouns. These stacked modifiers and nouns can be hard to read and sometimes create ambiguity. Add a few words (especially prepositions and conjunctions) to make the relationships between nouns clear to the reader.

Weak Example

Previous work has shown that a purified pro-oxidant, vitamin E-deficient fish oil diet protects mice against malaria parasites.

Improved Example

Previous work has shown that feeding a pro-oxidant diet containing fish oil, but devoid of vitamin E, protects mice against malaria parasites.

--Orville A. Levande et al., "Protection against Murine Cerebral Malaria by Dietary-Induced Oxidative Stress," Journal of Parasitology

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Adverbs ending in ly

Issues
  • highly
  • overly
  • quickly
  • inexpensively
Explanation

While an adverb ending with -ly has no grammatical problem, many consider it as bad style. Straight from "On Writing Well, 5th Edition" by William Zinsser: "Most adverbs are unnecessary. You will clutter your sentence and annoy the reader if you choose a verb that has a specific meaning and then add an adverb that carries the same meaning. Don't tell us that the radio blared loudly - "blare" connotes loudness. Don't write that someone clenched his teeth tightly - there's no other way to clench teeth. Again and again in careless writing, strong verbs are weakened by redundant adverbs."

So instead of using an adverb that modifies a verb, make sure you have a strong verb instead.

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Passive Voice

Issues
  • are dedicated
Explanation

Many scholars promote turning passive voice into active voice.

The Columbia Guide to Standard American English (1993) stated that:

Active voice makes subjects do something (to something); passive voice permits subjects to have something done to them (by someone or something). Some argue that active voice is more muscular, direct, and succinct, passive voice flabbier, more indirect, and wordier. If you want your words to seem impersonal, indirect, and noncommittal, passive is the choice, but otherwise, active voice is almost invariably likely to prove more effective.[10]

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Preposition Overuse

Issues

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Explanation

Some grammar experts claim that the fewer prepositions the better, and this check warns you if the ratio of prepositions is more than 1 preposition per 5 words.
Abundant prepositions: The data from the participants of younger age in this study were compared with those of subjects of older age by an analysis of variance.
“Healthy” ratio of prepositions: The data from the younger and older study participants were compared by an analysis of variance

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Grammar

Nouns

Proper Nouns Do Not Take Articles

Issues
  • the Philippines
    • Suggestion 1: Philippines
  • the Company
    • Suggestion 1: Company
  • the United
    • Suggestion 2: United
  • a Free
    • Suggestion 1: Free
Explanation

Proper nouns (e.g. John, Alice and India) do not take articles. 

  • Incorrect: The New York is a lovely city.
  • Correct: New York is a lovely city.
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Punctuation

Apostrophes

Contractions

n't

Issues
  • doesn't
    • Suggestion 1: does not
Explanation

Many guides recommend avoiding contractions, such as "I've, they're, didn't, we've", in formal writing, even though they are grammatically correct. 

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've

Issues
  • We've
    • Suggestion 1: We have
Explanation

Many guides recommend avoiding contractions, such as "I've, they're, didn't, we've", in formal writing, even though they are grammatically correct. 

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Commas

Serial Comma

No comma before and/or/nor in a series

Issues
  • development, social and
    • Suggestion 1: development, social, and
  • Malaysia, Singapore and
    • Suggestion 1: Malaysia, Singapore, and
Explanation

Many style guides require the serial comma that is the comma before a coordinating conjunction in a list. On the other hand, journalism guides do not require it.

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Mechanics

Repeated Punctuation

4 or more periods

Issues
  • profitability....
    • Suggestion 1: profitability...
    • Suggestion 2: profitability.
Explanation

Repeated punctuation means a punctuation repeated two or more times. This error is common writing often ignored by word processors and spell checkers.

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Spacing

No Space After Punctuation

No space after word+punctuation

Issues
  • delivery.ProjectsAcme
    • Suggestion 1: delivery. ProjectsAcme
Explanation

Punctuation should be followed by a white space, if not end of text or paragraph.

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Statistics

Sentence Opening Variation

Issues

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Explanation

Warns if sentences begin with the same words. Vary sentence beginnings for an enjoyable read.

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General Statistics

Issues

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Explanation

Stats on your text.

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Readability Scores

Issues

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Explanation

Various readability statistics.

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Sentence Length

Issues

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Explanation

Most professional editors and textbook writers try to maintain an average sentence length of 15 to 20 words. This ideal size range is based on chunking and human memory principles, and some sentences will be longer than 20 words. In academic texts for example, you may have sentences of 30 or 35 words.

Try to break up long sentences (more than 35 words) to smaller ones, and join short sentences (less than 10 words) to neighboring sentences with a coordinating or a subordinating conjunction.

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Sentence Rhythm

Issues

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Explanation

Vary short and long sentences for an enjoyable read.

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Similar Sentences

Issues

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Explanation

Algorithmic check highlighting sentence pairs with the highest similarity percentage and gives a warning if any is greater than 50%.

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Word Density

Issues

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Explanation

Word density higher than 5% may show a lack of vocabulary and variation in style resulting in a dull reading. This check verifies both paragraphs and the entire text for single and double word densities.

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Spelling

MySpell

Issues
  • BPO
    • Suggestion 1: BOP
    • Suggestion 2: BOO
    • Suggestion 3: BPS
    • Suggestion 4: BIO
    • Suggestion 5: BRO
  • outsourcer
    • Suggestion 1: outsource
    • Suggestion 2: outsources
    • Suggestion 3: outsourced
    • Suggestion 4: outsource r
    • Suggestion 5: outsourcing
    • Suggestion 6: outscore
    • Suggestion 7: outstretch
    • Suggestion 8: resourceful
  • teleservices
    • Suggestion 1: services
    • Suggestion 2: serviceable
    • Suggestion 3: serviceability
    • Suggestion 4: servicewomen
  • IM
    • Suggestion 1: MI
    • Suggestion 2: UM
    • Suggestion 3: OM
    • Suggestion 4: IN
    • Suggestion 5: I
    • Suggestion 6: M
    • Suggestion 7: ISM
    • Suggestion 8: AIM
    • Suggestion 9: RIM
  • UAE
    • Suggestion 1: USE
    • Suggestion 2: NAE
    • Suggestion 3: RAE
    • Suggestion 4: MAE
    • Suggestion 5: UTE
  • ProjectsAcme
    • Suggestion 1: Projects Acme
    • Suggestion 2: Projects-acme
    • Suggestion 3: Projectionist
    • Suggestion 4: Projectile
    • Suggestion 5: Projection
    • Suggestion 6: Projector
  • ACD
    • Suggestion 7: CAD
    • Suggestion 8: AC
    • Suggestion 9: AD
    • Suggestion 10: ACED
    • Suggestion 11: ACID
    • Suggestion 12: ACE
    • Suggestion 13: AID
    • Suggestion 14: AND
    • Suggestion 15: ACT
  • Dialer
    • Suggestion 16: Dial er
    • Suggestion 17: Dial-er
    • Suggestion 18: Dealer
    • Suggestion 19: Dialed
    • Suggestion 20: Diaper
    • Suggestion 21: Dialect
    • Suggestion 22: Dialyzes
    • Suggestion 23: Dialogue
    • Suggestion 24: Dialog
  • readingGet
    • Suggestion 1: reading Get
    • Suggestion 2: reading-get
    • Suggestion 3: Reading
    • Suggestion 4: reading
    • Suggestion 5: readiness
    • Suggestion 6: subheading
  • Rufino
    • Suggestion 1: Ruffian
    • Suggestion 2: Ruinous
    • Suggestion 3: Ruffle
    • Suggestion 4: Runoff
  • Makati
    • Suggestion 1: Makarios
    • Suggestion 2: Making
    • Suggestion 3: Maserati
    • Suggestion 4: Mating
Explanation

Spellchecking with the MySpell spellchecking dictionary. (This rule is currently in beta)

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Original Text

Original text is not shown for domain reports.

Parts of Speech

For an explanation of the Parts of Speech notation please click here. Acme_NNP BPO_NNP provides_VBZ integrated_JJ marketing_NN and_CC back-office_NN solutions_NNS for_IN our_PRP$ clients_NNS ._.
We_PRP are_VBP a_DT leading_VBG marketing_NN process_NN outsourcer_NN ._.
With_IN print_NN design_NN ,_, web_NN development_NN ,_, social_JJ and_CC search_NN marketing_NN ,_, customer_NN service_NN ,_, data_NNS processing_NN and_CC management_NN as_RB well_RB as_IN teleservices_NNS competencies_NNS ;_: we_PRP provide_VBP end-to-end_JJ solutions_NNS ._.
From_IN site_NN deployment_NN to_TO customer_NN support_NN via_IN email_NN ,_, IM_NNP ,_, and_CC voice_NN ;_: Acme_NNP offers_VBZ a_DT highly_RB creative_JJ and_CC comprehensive_JJ marketing_NN services_NNS platform_NN at_IN offshore_JJ rates_NNS ._.
We_PRP are_VBP dedicated_VBN to_TO the_DT notion_NN that_IN outsourcing_NN does_VBZ n't_RB have_VB to_TO be_VB overly_RB complex_JJ or_CC a_DT choice_NN between_IN economy_NN vs._CC quality_NN ._.
Our_PRP$ team_NN remains_VBZ focused_VBN on_IN delivering_VBG practical_JJ solutions_NNS for_IN process_NN delivery_NN in_IN a_DT flat_JJ world_NN ._.
Acme_NNP BPO_NNP Consulting_NNP works_VBZ with_IN captive_NN operations_NNS and_CC service_NN providers_NNS to_TO make_VB their_PRP$ offshore_JJ experience_NN better_RB ._.
Based_VBN in_IN the_DT Philippines_NNPS ,_, we_PRP support_VBP the_DT back-office_NN requirements_NNS for_IN businesses_NNS in_IN North_NNP America_NNP ,_, Australia_NNP ,_, China_NNP ,_, India_NNP ,_, Malaysia_NNP ,_, Singapore_NNP and_CC the_DT UAE._NNP
We_PRP 've_VBP helped_VBN them_PRP start_VB and_CC operate_VB quickly_RB and_CC inexpensively_RB using_VBG proven_VBN strategies_NNS for_IN BPO_NNP set-up_NN and_CC delivery_NN .ProjectsAcme_NN BPO_NNP January_NNP 27_CD ,_, 2011Acme_JJ BPO_NN seeking_VBG a_DT manager_NN for_IN its_PRP$ ACD/Predictive_NNP Dialer_NNP platform_NN ._.
This_DT position_NN is_VBZ responsible_JJ for_IN administering_VBG the_DT Company_NNP 's_POS ACD_NNP and_CC predictive_JJ dialer_NN functionality_NN for_IN BPO_NNP organization_NN with_IN operations_NNS in_IN the_DT United_NNP States_NNP ,_, the_DT Philippines_NNPS and_CC Pakistan_NNP ._.
You_PRP will_MD be_VB responsible_JJ for_IN maintaining_VBG the_DT Company_NNP 's_POS primary_JJ enterprise_NN platform_NN as_RB well_RB as_IN assisting_VBG local_JJ technical_JJ and_CC operational_JJ management_NN to_TO deploy_VB and_CC use_VB the_DT system_NN you_PRP achieve_VBP maximum_NN profitability_NN ...._: Keep_VB readingGet_JJ a_DT Free_NNP Quote_NNP
116_CD V.A._NNP Rufino_NNP Street_NNP
Makati_NNP City_NNP 1229_CD ,_, Philippines_NNPS
Suite_RB #_# 4504_CD

Phrases

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